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Welcome to my writers' services page. I can help you with manuscript and submission appraisal, structural/developmental editing and line/copy editing. I work with both fiction and non-fiction writers. If you have any questions or want to discuss booking an edit, you can contact me here.  Note: I have no availability of appraisal and editorial slots until February 2024 and availability will be limited throughout the year. You can, however, book a consultancy session online with me instead.

I knew from testimonials that you were good but I had no idea how good. I am not just impressed by the professional quality of your work but I know we can have a great working partnership.
— Jean Gill, author of Queen of the Warrior Bees, Arrows Tipped with Honey, The World beyond the Walls, The Ring Breaker
 

What I offer

My approach is kind, supportive and constructive. I won’t massage your ego with empty compliments but give you considerate, professional guidance and encouragement. I will highlight where your writing can be improved and give you actionable strategies so that you can smooth out, correct or restructure your work where necessary.

My reports are detailed and meticulous. If you’re writing fiction, I'll help you maximise your chances of fulfilment through storytelling, leading to potential publication. If you’re writing non-fiction, I’ll help you ensure your book is structured and expressed in the best way to reach and help your intended readership. If you're self-publishing, I'll help you to polish your text to a professional standard. If you’re an academic writer and English is not your first language my new service, Academic Editing for Non-native English Speakers will help ensure your work is readable and accurate.

I will always bear in mind that this is your book. And it is my job, always, to offer solutions to problems.

Writing may often seem like a lonely business – but you are not alone!

Scroll down for details of specific services. If you want to book an agent submission review service- contact me for details.

 

 
 
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Appraisals

An appraisal involves taking an overview of how your narrative is working. Fiction: I'll be examining pace and plot-structure, characterisation, dialogue, and any other key aspects affecting your reader's experience of the story. I'll also comment on your writing style: are your images telling, are there certain words and phrases you over-use? Do your sentences flow well and is your meaning clear? Non-fiction: I will be examining your structure and argument, how well you convey your message, how the flow of your book is working, whether everything hangs together and makes sense, plus aspects of your style, tone and expression. The in-depth report I'll write will give you constructive advice on how to address any of the issues I have pinpointed. Bonus: each appraisal includes a free line-edit (using Word track changes) of the first five pages of your manuscript.

'Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into the review. I was not expecting that level of detail. I'm really pleased with the feedback, it was exactly what I was after. It's great to get an objective view on this. I was struggling to pinpoint my own mistakes.' Conor W.

Fees:

Manuscript length:

Up to 20,000 words: £275; 20,001-60,000 words £480; 60,001-80,000 words £640; 80,001-100,000 words £800, after which level the fee will be £800 plus an additional £8 for each thousand words over 100,000.

In the first instance, contact me to book your appraisal, telling me a little about your project: for example, whether it is fiction or non-fiction, its genre if fiction and its subject if non-fiction, the word count and your timescale. 

 

 
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editing

As an experienced editor, my strength lies in concentrated and close focus on your story. I treat every client's story with as much care as I would my own. When I edit fiction, I 'inhabit' your story, thinking about the big picture aspects such as plot, pace, genre and market, characterisation, location and dialogue – but I also pay very close attention at the 'micro' level, homing in on whether that particular comma adds anything, whether your chronologies and internal dynamics are consistent, whether your facts are accurate, whether you know how to lay out dialogue, whether you've repeated the word 'peered' forty times in the book ...

If you’re writing non-fiction, I will apply these skills to the structure and expression of your book, taking an overall view of the flow, shape and argument as well as the features noted below. If you are an academic and English is not your first language, my Academic Editing for Non-native English Speakers will help you ensure your work is accurate and flows well.

Your options:

A developmental or structural edit focuses on the narrative or structure. It is a truly deep dive into all the aspects of your story or argument. You'll also receive a detailed, multi-page report summarising the book's strengths and problems, a review of each chapter and a section of detailed recommendations for revision or development. This report will help you take an overview of your work and its marketability while drilling down to the nitty gritty aspects of scene and chapter construction.

A line or copy edit pays attention to the words on the page and the flow and accuracy of the sentences. I will edit your manuscript using track changes in Word to highlight repetitions, inconsistencies, ambiguities and factual errors. I will note where you could improve clarity and flow, where you could sharpen images and vocabulary. I will draw your attention to grammar, spelling, punctuation and presentation. Where necessary, comments in the sidebar will explain in more detail where issues have arisen and I’ll present potential alternatives. I’ll create a style sheet which records the punctuation, presentation and spelling options we have opted for. This is particularly useful if you go on to write more in a series, helping you to remain consistent. A line edit on its own does not involve a report but I will compile a bullet-point list of any recurrent issues I spot which you may wish to address.

You can request a line edit only, without the report, of course, at reduced cost.

My full edit service combines developmental editing and line/copy editing as described above. You'll benefit from an overall review of your book, plus a meticulous line-by-line examination of it. I can supply both the report and the line edit at the same time but I recommend that you opt for the developmental edit first. When you’ve absorbed it and put into practice my recommendations for revision, then you can send the final manuscript through for the line edit.

'It's clear to me that you are very thorough indeed. You don't miss a thing! I need that. You do offer a very high quality service, that's for sure. Honest, accurate, intelligent and insightful. Just what I need!' M.A.

Contact me first to tell me a little about your project and its word count, plus the timescale you're working to. I'll ask you to send through a sample so that I can quote a fee for the work. Fees will vary according to the type and complexity of the work involved.

 
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test your first ten thousand

Wondering how the story is going? Wondering if you're making mistakes? This service gives you the chance to find out what's working and isn't working before you've gone too far. It will also help you if you've finished your novel and are thinking of editing it yourself. The advice I'll give you based on your first 10,000 words will give you the confidence and awareness you need to help you write the rest of the story. If you're self-editing, you'll be aware of potential issues the work as a whole may have, such as problems with spelling and punctuation, clarity and power of language, plot and pacing, redundancy and repetition and so on. In fact, this review is a writing course and an editing course all in one! Test your first 10,000 and make all the thousands of words you go on to write sharper, pacier, more accurate.

What do you receive?

  • a written report which goes into detail under relevant headings such as concept, pace, plot, characterisation, use of language and presentation

  • a full Track Changes edit and a summary sheet to keep you focused as you write or edit the rest of the work

Fee: £350

'A good editor is the difference between an amateur writer and a professional writer. An excellent editor takes things one step further, challenging the writer to rethink, rewrite and rise above the writer's own expectations. Ms Fergusson is an excellent editor. I think that says it all.' Anna Belfrage, author of the Graham Saga and of The Wanderer trilogy

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‘Working with Lorna offers the writer peace of mind, as she is a professional who pays attention to detail as well as offering astute guidance on setting, character and plot. I've attended Lorna's in demand Oxford University Summer School for Adults classes, and have used her editing services for both my young adult fantasy novels, Last of the Tasburai, Scream of the Tasburai and the forthcoming Legends of the Tasburai as well as for A Tudor Turk, A King’s Armour and A Demon’s Touch in my series The Chronicles of Will Ryde & Awa Maryam Al-Jameel, for HopeRoad Publishing. Without doubt I would recommend her Fictionfire services to all levels of writers.’  Rehan Khan, author


'The problem with giving writing to friends or relatives to read is they won't give an objective unbiased opinion on your writing. They also frequently can't guide you how to correct any problems. To use a plumbing analogy, they'll tell you that the sink is blocked, but they can't tell you where it's blocked, or help you to unblock it. Either that, or they'll tell you that the sink is wonderful and isn't blocked even though it is! In the worst case scenario, a bad critic can leave you feeling humiliated and demotivated.

Lorna is an excellent appraiser and editor, because she gives precise and professional guidance, but leaves you feeling happy and motivated to continue improving the piece. She has a deep respect for writers of all levels, for those brave enough to try to create something, and this respect shines through in her comments. She doesn't shy away from telling you the truth and giving suggestions on improvements, but she mixes criticisms with positive comments in a way which is fun and upbeat and spurs you to continue.' Daniel Emlyn-Jones